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Iganon

An unedited and incomplete project, cast aside to the forgotten folders of the hard drive.

The Daily Friz



Prologue

            There is something not quite right in the air this morning. All the men freshly waking to dew covered weapons placed about their tattered tents. This is the morning of the last great battle, where all hope of victory is in the hands of the gnomes and their monster. The gnome’s great cargo anchored just off shore. Held in the largest ship ever commissioned by his lordship, that thing awaits to be our savior from the very first trumpet blast. There is something not quite right about all of this. I can feel it as though the morning fog is offering us one last chance to forsake this battle and our dealings with the creature.

            “General, the men are fed and armed.” Captain Nairb is an ok lad. His position forced upon him too early by this war, but his youth masks his rather capable ability to lead. “What word do you have of the elven troops, Nairb?” “None sir, but we were told that they are with us in the trees around camp. No doubt they have been up for hours already, waiting on us.” “Do I sense some admiration for those forest beings Captain?” Nairb looked curiously through his hazel eyes at his general, but then firmed with his resolve. “Aside from my own blade there is no other than an elf’s arrow that I would want with me in battle, sir.” “My apologies Nairb, I forgot about your family ties to the elves with your half-brother Frizbeen. In any case I will alert the king of our troop’s preparations.”

            Making his way through his resting men Nairb hears the chatter of his troops. Oddly most seem cheerful with their expressions showing no hint of the coming battle. The last drops of the morning stew has completed its rounds through the mouths of once hungry men and the fog about them is lifting slowly as if to reveal what would normally have been an exceptional day. “Captain any word yet?” “None I am afraid, but all of you will have a chance to bloody your blades with enemy innards today, be it goblin or dragon.” “What of the Tarrasque?” asked a soldier from the gathering crowd around Nairb. “The gnomes and their monster will be joining us today when the first dragon is in view.” Nairb said, while prodding an empty bedroll with his boot. Across camp, a historian of sorts begins explaining out loud his notes on the current battle and the past which lead to this glorious day.

            The Great Goblin War started over ten years ago with the beheading of the heir to the goblin humanoid’s throne, the goblin prince Grumric. Some say that this was the act of human bandits, while others claim that Grumric made the misfortunate mistake of challenging an elite human adventurer for his sword.  Word of his death spread like wild fire throughout the kingdom thanks to a bard who overlooked the beheading. Enraged by the loss of their prince, the goblin tribes united under the rumored banner of war. With the goblin tribes working together their forces out numbered the human kingdoms in Iganon, leaving an ancient treaty to be invoked which enlisted the aid of the elves.

            Many battles were fought. With each human-elf allied victory the goblins retreated further into the defeat of the mountains. The dwarves of the sacred hills making sure that the goblins would find no refuge at the doorsteps of their caves, victory seemed at hand. In a desperate move the goblin elders sold themselves and their tribes into slavery to gain the aid of Iganon’s most powerful foes, the dragons, to guarantee them victory and revenge. The head of the evil dragon council was the aged and powerful red dragon Kilumoph. With the added might of these evil beasts human cities began to crumble and elven forest were burned to cinders. Kilumoph, being pleased with the many kingdoms’ looted treasures and his fattened belly, full of now dead brave men, ordered the goblins in servitude to construct monuments of his glory where every concurred city lie.

            Across vast oceans the war drums of Iganon were heard and the cry for aid by the human-elf alliance did not fall on deaf ears. Deep within the grayish rock covered mountains of Zander, a detached and ancient island floating freely from any plotted grid or map, the gnomes began to hatch a plan. The small scale of these being’s size effectively hid their awesome dark magical powers. For years beyond counting they have lived on the moving island in silent worship of their sleeping god, the Tarrasque. Fabled as to have been beaten by a group of higher gods, the Tarrasque has slept quietly in the area of its defeat. The Tarrasque is a monster twice the size of the largest dragon, the beast stands on hind legs with its back guarded by a jagged shell. Horns atop its head face outward towards the creature’s enemies. For years the gnomes built shrines of enormous proportions around its mountainous body. Clinging to its flesh magical enhancements and attaching the finest armored plates ever created by gnomish hands. The tribes of Zander made sure that their monster-god would never fail in battle again. For a thousand years they’ve waited for a chance to prove their god in battle and reclaim its lost honor. That battle has finally come, to the shores of Iganon.

            “Everyone, get in your formations! His majesty, King Havellent wishes an inspection arms prior to battle!” Nairb nimbly jumped on top of an over turned water pale and began shouting orders to his men. “Prepare left and right flanks, form off the center. Pike men to the front and swordsmen following behind, you know the drill. Squires, fetch my armor, hurry!” Within moments thousands of human men lined the now sunny fields that gapped the shore from a set of mountains.  Nairb standing proud and silent in front of his men, shifted unnoticeably beneath his armor as his King began to make his visual inspection of the mass ranks. King Havellent’s finely polish armor shown like a beacon through to the very last man in the hind ranks, his voice boomed with commands from his rough and aged throat. “That is my king”, thought Nairb proudly.  Havellent’s advisor road to match with the king’s horse, just one company away from Nairb and his men they halted. The two men conversed in hushed tones; finally the king broke away and shouted with the lungs of man half his age, “Ready battle formations! Give them nothing but fear from our blades!” The army of men roared so loudly that the ground shook with their vigor. In the distance a monster afloat begins to stir from its ancient slumber. 

            The gnome elder, rich with his dark magic is the first to notice the Tarrasque beginning to waken. Tied through a magical bond he and the beast are one. Every wakening moment for the Tarrasque is controlled through the will of this one experienced gnome. His thoughts merge with the monsters until the elder gnomes wishes become the Tarrasque’s actions. Absolute concentration and focus is guarded for this monster-god is a powerful weapon which cannot be left to be wielded on its own. “The dragons have made their presence known to the battle, your grace. It is time.” said a gnome messenger in a hushed voice while lowering his hand to the stained purple cloak of his elder.

            The collision of metal swords and arrows sinking deep into wooden shields fill the air. The goblin force’s second line thundering down the mountain to aid their weakening first line get surprised by elven arrows erupting for the nearby woods. Elven foot soldiers join in following dislodged boulders into to backs of goblin troops. Looking from high on a peak, a goblin standing half the height of a well sized man surveys the battlefield through his deformed grey eyelids. “Where are Kilumoph and his hordes? Why are they not here yet? My beloved people will have no servitude to them in death!” As if through some magic a demonic voice penetrates deep into the goblin commander’s thoughts. “Fromerric, you sniveling little worm, never doubt our resolve to the agreement your people made. Look to the skies my foolish servant; your revenge is at hand I assure you.” With a piercing pain the voice left his mind as Fromerric cast his gaze skyward to reveal group of twenty, no thirty dragon silhouettes soaring through the clouds. Fromerric placed a thick wooden helm on his stout head and slide down the side of the mountain to join in what would be the glory of this battle.

            Counting to himself, Nairb dodges a blow from a thrown spear. “Now I lost count. Darn you filth!” Swinging his blade in annoyance he cut down the closest goblin with a single cleave. “Send third platoon to the front, lead with arrows to the goblin flanks!” “Yes, sir!” bellowed a young man running to the back of the battle. Nairb thought quietly to himself as he dueled with one of the rare skilled goblins he has encountered. “Where are all the dragons at and what of the gnome’s Tarrasque? At this rate victory will be ours without the aid of gnomish tricks.” Nairb’s thoughts began to ease until he felt an immense eruption of heat from above him. “Dragons!” “Take cover!” Jumping behind a pile of dead bodies, Nairb’s skin began to boil. He closed his eyes as the screams of enflamed men dug deep in his heart. Another wave of heat caught him as he began to stand from behind his gruesome hiding place. His steel helm burning the flesh of his face, Nairb peeled his helmet from his head. Pain of his melted and torn skin zapped his strength temporarily. Swatting aside his remaining light colored hair, Nairb manages to focus on a landing dragon. Nairb begins preparing to make a charge; then the battlefield fell silent.

            At first the sky darkened and then a powerful rain fell from above. Fear captured those brave enough to look where several large ships once were docked. The darkness came from no cloud, nor did the seconds of heavy rain descend from the heavens. The Tarrasque had awakened. Growing three times in size instantly the monster sank the ships surrounding it, casting a wave of water high into the sky over the battlefield. The dragon’s fire rinsed from the still living men. The gnome elder, standing safely on land surrounded by the king’s own personal guard, was now showing signs of fatigue. Towering over even the largest dragon the Tarrasque waded closer in land. Some men cheered at the great monster’s sight while others stared in horrified postures. The remaining goblin men beginning to flee in retreat, all the while the dragons stood their ground.

            Catching a sight of a short heavily armored goblin making his way toward retreat, Nairb broke from his gaze at the monster and pursued this goblin of obvious importance. Up the side of the mountain with stone chipping away at his feet, Nairb gained on the goblin. After finding some flat ground the goblin warrior turned to meet his pursuer. “You think that this changes anything?” said Fromerric with a fearsome growl. “Your monster will fall beneath the dragon lord’s might!” Steadying his blade Nairb stepped quietly forward, his form flawless, his posture deadly and unflinching. “I see you have tasted the dragon’s fire already, you human swine. What is left of your people after today will be nothing but cattle for our masters to sport.” Lunging forward unmoved by the goblin’s words, Nairb thrust sharply at his prey. Connecting with a single blow, he pierced the breastplate of Fromerric. Deep he drove his blade into the deflating lung of the goblin, bubbles forming around his wound as he breathed. Through blood gargled speech Fromerric cried, “Who are you, so that I may await you in hell!?” Calmly withdrawing his blade, a reply could softly be heard, “Nairb.”

            Turning from his high perch, Nairb surveyed the battle still raging below him. He saw the Tarrasque on land now trampling whole areas of enemy goblins under its feet. A medium sized dragon was held between the monster’s massive teeth, two greater dragons lay dying about the beast’s tail. Most of the goblins began to break their ranks and flee. Even all but one of the remaining dragons began to recede into the clouds. Turning to his dying foe Nairb spoke. “Ha, and you thought that this battle would be yours? Such foolish hope you have for your fleeing people and winged masters.” now seated against a bolder Fromerric pointed over the shoulder of Nairb with a slight grin. “Look at my master. The lone dragon, Kilumoph needs no aid to vanquish your demon.”

            The battle had taken its toll on the aged gnome. Hands trembling with each new magical gesture to control the Tarrasque, he sees this last dragon swooping from above. A very old and ancient colossal red dragon which’s scales must be plated with centuries of treasure from his bedding. “So Kilumoph, I finally meet you.” Thought the elder as the Tarrasque grappled with the dragon. The red dragon’s claws actually chipping through the magical wards and armor on the monster’s hide. Each beast’s size is immense with the Tarrasque only at a slight advantage. With one well placed tackle the Tarrasque pinned Kilumoph to the ground by his wings. Desperately Kilumoph bit at the Tarrasque wildly. With a final savage blow the monster tore into the base of the great red dragon’s neck. Fire exploded from the body, filling the air with a thick sulfur and ash smell. Kilumoph now dead at the feet of the gnome’s creature, the goblin men that were still engaged withdrew in a sign of surrender.

            Carrying the decapitated head of the goblin leader down the mountain, Nairb then met with the king who was in the middle of the battlefield. “Sire, I do not see my general so, if you would excuse my rudeness but I believe this to be the head of goblin lord, Fromerric. I dedicate my victory to you my king.” “Young Nairb, I see the scared badges of battle have taken a toll on you today. I have noticed your skill and cunning with admiration from afar. This offering that you have brought before me only encourages my decision. I bestow the position of general on you now, if you accept.” Kneeling Nairb spoke bravely, “I accept this great honor and will…” Screaming from the king’s private guard announced, “The Gnome Elder is dead!” Turning their view aside both king and Nairb saw the Tarrasque feasting wilding on the corpse in front of it, the gnome elder laying expired where he once weakly stood, a single jade arrow showing in his side. “Nairb, gather everyman that can still stand and flee to the doc town of Lander City at once; we cannot fend off this creature now and must regroup there. I will send word of retreat to my other generals as well. Go now and save your men and yourself!” Having his worse fear realized with the Tarrasque now free from allied control, the king rushed off to the general’s tent leaving Nairb alone with his orders.

 

Chapter 1

            A month since departing from the once great port town of Lander, the then booming town can no longer be seen from across the still ocean’s body. Aboard the one of the last sailable ships the precious cargo of war refuges lay about the deck. Priests and those with any ability for medical applications tend to the sick and injured, all starving from long emptied stomachs. Aside from the scattered suffering bodies above deck the ocean was calm and the sun shown brightly on cloudless skies. The curious appearance of the ship itself was defined by grayish wood which gave a metallic clunk underfoot and odd red vines going in and out of gaps of its wooden planks. Hope for the people aboard rests in the ship’s commander’s ability to find an island said to move freely about the waves. Under the refuges, another aboard was not so fawned of staying put and in view of the ship’s crew.

            In the dark underbelly of the ship a tall man baring both human mass and elfish features works hastily sorting through crates and other cargo, as if looking for something. This peculiar individual’s appearance reveals itself through a flickering oil lamp on top of a pile of dusty wooden boxes. His eyes reflect a green-hazel glow when his long brown hair is swept from in front of his face. Through slender lips he mutters to himself in frustrated whispers. “I know they must have some stashed around here somewhere. The crew always walking around without fading moral and relaxed expressions, I will find it.” Stumbling over small crumbled bits of wood he falls backwards making a loud thud against some stacked crates. “I hope no one heard that.” He said to himself. Still laying where he landed the human-elf looks up in time to see a balancing crate wobble and fall from its perch on top of his head. The crate connecting with his skull and then bouncing to the ground in front of him breaks open.  A bottle clearly labeled as wine rolls from the injured cargo and rests by his foot. With his last few moments of consciousness from the blow he smiles, “I knew it.”

            Elsewhere above deck a wounded human man awakes from a month long coma. Opening his eyes the man sees an older kindly looking fellow kneeling over him praying quietly in some sort of divine spell. Confusion shifts through his head as he looks about the ship seeing the others, all strangers to him, being tended to. At first the he shifts quietly getting a feel for his body, that seems so unfamiliar to him. He notices a muscular build that must be of average height judging from those around him. The skin on the back of his hands displays a taught, tan, glow, “So I must be young.” he thought. Finally sitting up he feels pops and creaking from his bones, the priest attending to him stops his prayer and asks, “How are you feeling my friend. You’ve been out for some time. I hope you don’t mind but we’ve been tending to you with some things that we found in your pack.” Clearing his throat the healed man speaks, “No, I don’t mind.” His voice sounding foreign to him, “Wait, you said I had some belongings with me, where are they now?” Sliding over a well worn backpack made of various leathers the priest turns away. “I must tend to the others now while Soulus is still answering my prayers. Be well and blessed, poor soul.”

            As the man sat sifting through unfamiliar belongings a soft female voice speaks directing her words to him. “You there warrior, how was your rest?” Looking up revealed a youthful elven woman of small stature and frail build, her bodily features otherwise hidden by a finely woven dark green cloak. “And who is this that speaks to me, so that I may greet you properly my lady?” “Olivia. Olivia the Wizard Hapsphere’s only surviving apprentice. Now who may I ask are you of whom I have watched sleeping peacefully this past month?” “A month? I have been asleep for that long?” he said confused. “Maybe even longer. You were carried on board with a few of the other wounded men by priest of Soulus. No one really could tell me anything about you, not that I inquired enough to be counted as rude.” she said to him. “To be honest with you I do not remember anything, my name, where I come from, and how I ended up here, I do not recall anything at all.” Olivia forcing the issue, “Well what would you have yourself be called, till we find out your parent’s preference?” Shaking freely from a cluster of wrapped objects within his pack, two swords clank against the deck of the ship. Finally with a feeling of belonging he gently touched the two weapons. “well I guess you can call me, Blades.”


Should this abomination ever be completed?

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